You’re a writer. You have an idea for a book, and you spend weeks, months, even years crafting your idea into a manuscript. You have friends and family read it and tell you they think it’s great. As a result, you become more confident and start submitting your work to publishers.
In a nutshell, that’s how many of us think; that it’s an easy process and we’re going to have the next bestseller. But it’s not that easy. Here’s one thing publishers and editors can agree with: Not all manuscripts are created equal. You may feel your work is a masterpiece, only to find markups and edits all over your work after submitting it, or even worse, receiving rejection letter after rejection letter. Well here are a few tips for you to follow when writing and revising your manuscript that will help you develop and polish your work before it leaves your hands.
Proofread

Sometimes the simplest mistakes can hurt your chances of impressing an agent, editor, or publisher.This goes for not only your manuscript itself, but for emails, query letters, and any type of correspondence. Watch for spelling errors, grammar, and punctuation. Some of us may be used to short-hand abbreviations used with texting or Twitter, so be careful not to write, “U,” or “Thx,” when typing. All of these will affect your professionalism and your talents as a writer.
Transitions
One thing an editor will be looking for is transitions. For example, how well one paragraph flows into the next. They’ll also be looking at how well you bring your reader into situations (too fast or too slow), and how each of your scenes and chapters tie in with the overall story. You want to make sure your work is seamless…this goes for fiction and non-fiction manuscripts.
Show the readers, don’t tell them
When outlining a novel, you may start out by listing the situations in a scene, which is often a great idea to getting your ideas down on paper.
But when you begin filling in your story, you want to show the readers instead of telling them. What do I mean by this? Instead of making a laundry list of actions and reactions, provide the readers with details of characters, their expressions, movements, etc. Create a scene where the reader can come to their own perceptions of your characters and story by the details and descriptions you offer.
Give credit where credit is due
When editors read through a manuscript, they also look for citations. If you’re submitting a non-fiction manuscript, be sure to cite quotations, work from another book, and photographs. In today’s day and age, it is very easy to Google a photograph or text of a book. Does it mean you should do it?
There are copyright laws out there and the last thing you want on your reputation is that you plagiarized someone else’s work. So if you do decide to use the work of others, please give them credit for it.



